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Why do I always pick the shallow end
to show off my swan dive
as if rules don't apply to me
like it's not gonna hurt
when I smack my head
and reality hits
when they're dragging me out of the pool
he'll be there
he'll be standing next to her
the two of them
shaking their heads as if to say
what were you thinking
they'll be giggling then they'll kiss
and wander off into the sunset
leaving me there bleeding at the heart
I know what your thinking
I said I'd hit my head
it was just a figure of speach
and my heart is in his hands now
I handed it straight to him
just now tonight
But he thinks it's a bowling ball
he's gonna throw it around
he's gonna knock me down
all in oblivion
because I didn't have the balls
to let him know
that I am all in
so I lose
and he wins
but that is just me
I always pick the shallow end...
©2003-2010 ~LadyBeeth
:iconladybeeth:

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I hurt myself constantly...
do I think I am immune to life
to the effects I cause.
what am I not getting?

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:iconkchan:
Many people can relate to this, myself included. The only criticism I could give it is positive.
A soul is often reflected through a person's work, and like your work, your soul is quite beautiful.

--
Forever after, The End.
:iconladybeeth:
unshakespearian?
how so?
I feel retarded having to ask but how else am I to learn anything right?
:iconlionwolfenganger:
i like how unshakespearian it is
:iconladybeeth:
you are a weirdo but thats why we keep you around ;)
there ain't nothin' wrong with that

thank you for the compliment
I too have many a page written from the other side
I think they are less brutal though
somehow I end up in more pain by hurting others than I do getting hurt by them... whatever thats about.
I am the wuss

anyhow thanks~
:iconebineesey:
Fantastic. It's something i can relate to in so many ways. It's sad when one realizes while reading a poem like this that they could fit in either character's shoes... Sort of makes me feel old or even abused. Perhaps that couldn't be less true.

Very well written, i have no technical comments for you here. Unless spelling is a concern, i cannot spell, im not afraid to admit it... nor can i usually spot when someone else has misspelled... unless it's really bad... i'm not a weirdo.
:iconnumb-entity:
cute
very sweet n frank
carry on such stuff

--
Survival is hard reality
Life an endless dream..........

*the-zodiac-club
:iconladybeeth:
thank you ;)
will do

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